lucky one she is... u have described her and ur love for who and wat it really is.... i felt like i was in love by coing thru every word and verse... dude dont ever stop writing!! honest!
oh - my - gosh...this poem is soooo beautiful...its so touching you made tears come to my eyes. You've got a great talent, you know how to express yourself with words really well. Keep it up!
the lines are progressively absorbing n da last two stanzas really stirs da heart..wow man..i doubt der can be a better tribute..whoever u wrote dis 4 she must be proud!
This is so good. I am very happy for you and proud of you. One of the important things about artistic work is to use your experiances as they have depth, meaning and feelings that are pure and true that can make the work absolutely divine. Nice job!!! you should try and form a tune for it so that it can be sung coz I'm darn sure that it woould sound brilliant. Take care. Nuwi.
Nice poem buddy...frankly speakin ... i dont like reading....bt smone told me to read this poem;)...Its really nice..wish I could write smthing for ma someone;) Great goin....
Brilliant i love it.... nothing else to it... that poem says it all man... very few can express wat they really feel, like the way u have.. So keep it up
Hey Thilina Wow.... you once again leave us so amazed by your thoughts.... First of all, let me congratulate u on a job well done. Just like SMI said, reading through the lines, i felt as if i was in love! Tasha is really lucky.... You not only express ur thoughts so eloquently but also get it to rhyme too! Keep up the good work..... Wish you all the best..... Love, Chayanika.
hmmmm.... wat can i say? u r one crazy lover!!!! n dose words r lyk i dont knw.... u r simply da best at it.... n its really long men... hw did u manage 2 do dat? neways i think its one of ur best works... i just dont knw wat 2 say.... i was out of words wen i read it..... its actually awsome... man..... i really think u shud put ur skills 2 gud use.... neways keep on writin dude.... gud luck in everything man... tc bye
I'm a Sri Lankan pursuing a chemical engineering undergraduate course at the University of Nottingham. Ironically i hated literature in school but now writing poetry has become my passion and a way of expressing myself in verse. My fav quote "Love is like a prickly rose!" I would greatly appreciate if you all would kindly add in your comments and feedback as to your opinions of my work!
13 Comments:
lucky one she is... u have described her and ur love for who and wat it really is.... i felt like i was in love by coing thru every word and verse... dude dont ever stop writing!! honest!
oh - my - gosh...this poem is soooo beautiful...its so touching you made tears come to my eyes. You've got a great talent, you know how to express yourself with words really well. Keep it up!
the lines are progressively absorbing n da last two stanzas really stirs da heart..wow man..i doubt der can be a better tribute..whoever u wrote dis 4 she must be proud!
This is so good. I am very happy for you and proud of you. One of the important things about artistic work is to use your experiances as they have depth, meaning and feelings that are pure and true that can make the work absolutely divine.
Nice job!!!
you should try and form a tune for it so that it can be sung coz I'm darn sure that it woould sound brilliant.
Take care.
Nuwi.
Hey Thilli,
Nice poem buddy...frankly speakin ... i dont like reading....bt smone told me to read this poem;)...Its really nice..wish I could write smthing for ma someone;)
Great goin....
Guesss ????
Its Arun:-P
Yo thili thats some good stuff u got down there, man, real strong, real natural....
ahhhh i know exactly how you feel:)
am happy for you!
yo thili!
rockin poem dude....it's jst amazinnn...
beautifully romantic
do keep writin!
Hai Thilina,
Cute poem really. Post more......help guys like me!!;-)
Brilliant i love it....
nothing else to it... that poem says it all man... very few can express wat they really feel, like the way u have.. So keep it up
I hope everything is well..
Take care,
Azeem
Hey Thilina
Wow.... you once again leave us so amazed by your thoughts.... First of all, let me congratulate u on a job well done. Just like SMI said, reading through the lines, i felt as if i was in love! Tasha is really lucky.... You not only express ur thoughts so eloquently but also get it to rhyme too! Keep up the good work..... Wish you all the best.....
Love,
Chayanika.
hmmmm.... wat can i say? u r one crazy lover!!!! n dose words r lyk i dont knw.... u r simply da best at it.... n its really long men... hw did u manage 2 do dat? neways i think its one of ur best works... i just dont knw wat 2 say.... i was out of words wen i read it..... its actually awsome... man..... i really think u shud put ur skills 2 gud use....
neways keep on writin dude....
gud luck in everything man...
tc
bye
WoW Thili
Dnt kno wat 2 say Its really nice man U r nt nly a good singer bt also a good poet ha? Keep it up Ur talent is amazin Thili
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